the barowner's son/act 2 notes

twocancook

these are notes for act 2. act 1 is below under "the bar owner's
son/young gun".

in act 1, the bouncer, masonic, and the bar patron , ariel, had just left the bar. they are driving in his van.

ariel: to her self: my first impression of him: good looking, but creepy??
masonic to her: don't be afraid.this isn't even a real gun. i was playing with my nephew before work. look, see, it's just a toy (takes it apart)
ariel: well you sure scared that brat, aven-tine-us!! ha ha
i'm hip. i'm always up for a good time.
masonic; i do have to go home though. i really am on probation.
ariel: for what?
m: this and that. one time, i was 19, i was with my buddies and we held up a taxi driver. another time we pulled a gun at a convenience store. for that , i went to jail. now it seems like whenever anything bad happens, if i was any where near the site it's me who gets arrested. so i go between jail and probation.
ariel: that sucks. i know my brother 's been in jail a few times...once they label you "bad', you're bad.
m: exactly!.................baby, you really are fabulous!!!
oh, it's almost 10pm, we better hurry...

they arrive at his apt, in bushwick.

masonic; i 'd better call my officer.......(on phone)
hey be careful of my dog, he can be vicious...
ariel: what's his name?
m:clay. cassius clay.
a: hi clay (playing with him, cuddles up tohim)
m: be careful...(on phone)wow i've never seen him so friendly before.
a; oh i really like animals....

meanwhile back at the bar:with shannon and feder.
shannon: well, is your dad coming by??
feder; i hope not. he'll be pissed about how slow it is around here. i can't believe that bouncer. what a prick?!!
shannon; you were the prick. no wonder he quit.
feder; yeah but he pulled a gun
shannon: did you get close look at it?
f: no, why?
s: maybe it was fake.....it's not like he shot it or anything
feder; all of these bouncers are all the same. ex con backgrounds.
s: who else would work for what you pay them ??
feder; i don't pay them. my father does.
s; oh, so now you're NOT the boss???
f; (steel, sharp glance at her. menacing yet pleading)
anyways should i worry at all about that girl?
s: we don't even know her name???
f: what's on tv tonight?
shannon; (looks at cable guide) oh, my god, i forgot, it's ncaa final four weekend...let's get this place in order,,,we'll be packed tonight
feder; my money's on (fill in team)
.........................

in brooklyn.

ariel: i like hanging out with you, masonic.i don't live too far from here. i never kiss on the first date
masonic; i wish you would stay. but i can't leave now to drive you home, you know,it's past my curfew
ariel; that's ok.....i can get car service to my house
masonic; holds her, they kiss..she turns, walks out the door


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note: lovemaking scene:
first impressions: he' still a little creepy but he's good looking.
masonic: she's got some "tig ol bitties">>>>

masonic: to ariel; what's your name???
under the covers, look remember when they were joking at the bar about young guns....well here's another line, but for ladies: you've got "tig ol bitties